Talk:Shivans

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This article is written primarily in an in-universe context. Someone fix this. - Snail 06:10, 12 October 2008 (CDT)

Not sure that's necessary or wise. Much of it is copying the FS2 techroom description. - Ngtm1r 14:06, 16 October 2008 (CDT)

In that case, the source should be stated and the text reverted to the original. Right now I'd have to say this is a pretty rubbish article. I'd like to completely rewrite it if nobody minds. - Snail 14:29, 16 October 2008 (CDT)

Go ahead. I've no idea where to start. If you can do a better job, go for it and I'll see how I can help along the way. -- Androgeos Exeunt 22:32, 16 October 2008 (CDT)
    • This article is in awful shape. I pulled out a couple choice oddities but it needs a rewrite, as Snail suggested. General Battuta 02:24, 25 June 2009 (UTC)