Talk:Mars's theory

I spellchecked the article and wikified it a little bit, but I've got some problems with the following lines:
Rivera Station was the site of development for early shield prototypes GTM MX-50, which makes one question where exactly this technology was coming from. Potentially, the GTI conducted experiments on Shivans very early, possibly triggering the attack, seeming like imperial attackers (like they were). When Bosch explained the GTI in no way represented humanity, the Shivans destroyed Capella's sun
I think this bit requires some clarification from Mars. - TopAce 20:48, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

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